Banana peel

bannana peel is
okay for monkeys, but not
so good underfoot

Thanks to the inadequate instructions, and because I didn't want to do "bread" or "bacon" (which I figured everyone else would do), and knowing monkeys/apes sometimes ate the peel as well as the actual banana, I made this choice in good faith, but it was "wrong". Also I misspelled "banana". Oops.

Teacher's comment reads:

This should be for "banana" only (note spelling). People don't eat banana peel! Also, each line in a haiku should be self-contained. Remember this is verse, not just sentences divided by syllable groupings!
points: 2

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