noodles for dinner
boiled with carrots and snow peas
simple but tasty

Teacher's comment reads:

Very good!!
points: 4

So despite my having (yet again) used more than one food item in a single haiku (something she later criticised in front of the class, about everyone who did it; thankfully it wasn't just me), this was "very good"?? Perhaps she was overtired. Perhaps she needed to clean her glasses. Who knows...

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