Sausages

sausages splitting
rolling in the greasy pan
put them on my plate

Teacher's comment reads:

Good!
points: 4

But whyyyyyy is this "good"? Compared to "Krill" and "Orange cordial" it's got no style, and yes, I was getting fed up with the assignment by this point (though not bored, certainly tired and frustrated).

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